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Alan Scott's avatar

Tom, love seeing you experiment with new structures! Having caught myself falling into the AI polish trap recently, I’m hyper-aware of how those tools can subtly take over a writer's natural rhythm. I’ll always be a big fan of your raw, unedited, human voice, that’s the signature Tom style I always look forward to reading. Defend the faith bro!

Tom's avatar

Thanks Alan. It means a lot to me that you think i have a signature style. It makes me feel like a real writer.

Gathering the Pieces of Me's avatar

Tom, this is great!! Very mysterious and I want to know more. Your characters are interesting and I love how Julia is a but if a free spirit and prepared to take a chance on Oscar. So glad you shared.

Tom's avatar

Thank you so much! It was an intentional decision to write to have fun and I lost three hours to it 😂. Hopefully I’ll continue the story at some point.

Gathering the Pieces of Me's avatar

Well, off you go and write some more soon because I need to know about these dead mice!! 🐁🐁🐁

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🫡😂